Wednesday, October 24, 2007

iterate me!

its all small talk...not important, or insightful, or even entertaining.
repeating myself
"this sounds just like that other entry you wrote a few back...bored"
why strive to come up with some new thing or feeling to write about?
iterations! iterations! iterations! of the same feelings...of the same 10%.
go ahead, say it.... "cry me a river susana, shut the fuck up!"

2 comments:

  1. I come from Alabama
    With my banjo on my knee
    I'm going to Louisiana,
    My true love for to see

    It rained all night
    The day I left
    The weather it was dry
    The sun so hot,
    I froze to death
    Susanna, don't you cry

    Oh, Susanna,
    Oh don't you cry for me
    For I come from Alabama
    With my banjo on my knee

    I had a dream the other night
    When everything was still
    I thought I saw Susanna
    A-coming down the hill

    The buckwheat cake
    Was in her mouth
    The tear was
    In her eye
    Says I, I'm coming from the south
    Susanna, don't you cry

    Oh, Susanna,
    Oh don't you cry for me
    For I come from Alabama
    With my banjo on my knee

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  2. Susy, you should know by now that CRACK KILLS!

    (I'm just joshing. I enjoy this freeform poetry. You keep going.)

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